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AU: I am taking "section" to mean, e.g., "1.2 Usage examples". In the following sentence and elsewhere, I change it to "chapter" if appropriate.
data-visualization/data-visualization-in-context.rst L17 - confirm the section/chapter wording is now consistent.
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AU: Do you have publication dates for the Few books?
data-visualization/data-visualization-in-context.rst L54 - Stephen Few: Show Me the Numbers (2004, 2nd ed. 2012), Information Dashboard Design (2006), Now You See It (2009). Add the dates where the books are cited.
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AU: In this chapter, page references to section links are shown as "page 279". I have been using "p. 279" in previous chapters. To be consistent, please either change the format...
design-analysis-experiments.rst L324 - pick one convention ("page" vs "p.") and sweep all chapters.
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AU: It would be nice to italicize the individual terminology words (outcome, factor, objective, etc.) ... But italicizing doesn't seem to be compatible with :index:. Is there a way to make it work?
design-analysis-experiments.rst L352 - Sphinx supports this: write *term* in the text with a separate .. index:: directive above the paragraph, or a custom role. Decide and apply.
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AU: I inserted the two main ways. Please confirm.
assessing-significance-of-main-effects-and-interactions.rst L12`` - note: the rendered sentence below it now says three ways (Pareto/Lenth, and standard error) after the recent Lenth's-method PR, so this comment is stale; confirm and delete.
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AU: I modified the last sentence of the following paragraph because it seemed redundant. Please confirm.
assessing-significance-of-main-effects-and-interactions.rst L244`` - read the paragraph, confirm the edit stands, delete the comment.
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