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Commentary - What Investors Actually Look For

I've reviewed hundreds of decks at batko.ai/pitchmaster. Here's what I see again and again - the patterns that work and the patterns that quietly kill a raise.

The macro view

A pitch deck is not a business plan. It's a conversation starter. Its job is to get you a meeting, not to close the round.

That changes everything:

  • It needs to be fast to read (90 seconds, not 9 minutes)
  • It needs to be specific enough to provoke questions
  • It needs to leave gaps - the gaps are where the meeting happens

Decks that try to answer every question end up answering none. Decks that pick the 10 most important things and nail them get meetings.

What investors do in the first 30 seconds

Eye-tracking studies (and my own observation) show investors do this with every deck:

  1. Open the deck, scan the title slide for 2 seconds.
  2. Skip to traction. Always. They want to know if there's evidence first.
  3. Skip to team. Are these the right people for this?
  4. Skip to ask. What's the round size?
  5. Then, if interested, read from slide 1.

This is why the traction slide is the most important slide in your deck. It's also why the team slide isn't filler - it's the second thing they look at.

If you're pre-traction, you have a different problem: you need the team slide and the insight slide to do double duty. More on that below.

Slide-by-slide: what investors are looking for

Title

Investors don't care about the title slide. Don't waste time on it. What they're looking for: what does this company do? Make it impossible to misunderstand.

Problem

What they're looking for: is this a real pain? Will customers pay to fix it?

The best problem slides make the investor feel uncomfortable. They show a specific group of people losing something specific. "Engineers burn out" is bad. "67% of senior engineers say on-call is the #1 reason they consider leaving" is good.

Solution

What they're looking for: can this person explain their product in 30 seconds? If yes, they probably understand their customer. If no, they probably don't.

Solution slides should be obvious. If your solution requires a paragraph of explanation, the problem isn't the slide - it's your understanding of the customer.

Market

What they're looking for: has this founder thought rigorously about size? They are NOT looking for a big number.

A founder who shows a $50B TAM with no methodology gets dismissed. A founder who shows a $400M TAM with a clear bottom-up calculation gets respect. The second founder will get more meetings even though their number is 100x smaller.

The market slide is a credibility test, not a number test.

Product

What they're looking for: does this thing actually exist? Does it look reasonably good? Can a normal person use it?

Screenshots are non-negotiable. A pitch deck without a product screenshot signals "not built yet" or "embarrassed by the UI." Both are killers.

If your product genuinely doesn't exist yet, replace this slide with a "what we'll build" slide showing wireframes. But know that this puts you in a different category - pre-product means you're selling vision, and your team slide needs to carry more weight.

Traction

What they're looking for: proof. Something that shows people want this.

Traction comes in tiers. From best to worst:

  1. Revenue with retention. Customers pay AND stick around.
  2. Revenue without retention proof yet. Customers pay (early days).
  3. Active usage with no revenue. People use it daily, you haven't monetised yet.
  4. Signups with no usage. Vanity. Investors discount this to ~zero.
  5. Waitlist. Investors discount this to zero unless it's a real waitlist with verified emails and >1000 names.
  6. Letters of intent. Discount to zero unless they're signed by someone senior.

Whatever tier you're at, be honest about it. Investors can smell when traction is dressed up. They reward honesty about being early; they punish exaggeration.

Business model

What they're looking for: is this a venture-scale business?

The unspoken question on this slide is: "If this works, can it return our fund?" Investors need businesses that could plausibly be worth $1B+. Your business model slide should make that math feel possible.

The three things that make a business model feel venture-scale:

  1. High gross margins (>70% for software)
  2. Repeat revenue (subscription or transactional with high frequency)
  3. Net expansion (existing customers spend more next year)

If you don't have all three, you can still raise venture money - but you need to make a strong case for why one of the missing pieces will appear later.

Competition

What they're looking for: does this founder understand the landscape? Have they thought about why they win?

Two things make this slide work:

  1. Honest competitor list. Include the obvious ones. Investors will Google the rest anyway, so showing only the weak ones makes you look naive.
  2. A clear differentiator that maps to the customer's problem. "We're cheaper" is weak. "We solve a specific pain the incumbents ignore" is strong.

The "we have no competition" slide is a tell. Every business has competition - even if it's the customer doing nothing. Founders who say they have no competition haven't talked to enough customers.

Team

What they're looking for: are these the right people for THIS company?

A team slide is not a CV dump. It's an argument for "founder-market fit." For each founder, you should be able to answer:

  • Why is this person uniquely positioned to solve this problem?
  • What do they know that other founders don't?
  • What have they done before that proves they can execute?

A founder who has lived the problem for 10 years is more compelling than a founder with three exits in unrelated fields.

If you don't have the obvious credentials, write the team slide differently: focus on insight, customer development, and the early signal you've already created.

Ask

What they're looking for: does this founder know what they need and why?

The strongest ask slides do three things:

  1. Specific number. "$4M" not "$3-5M." Ranges signal indecision.
  2. Specific milestones. "$200K MRR + US sales office" not "scale the team."
  3. Existing momentum. "Lead sought, existing investors committed for 30%" creates urgency.

The weakest ask slides say things like "we're raising to scale the company." That tells investors you don't know exactly what you're spending the money on.

The pre-traction problem

If you don't have traction, your deck needs to work harder elsewhere. The slides that have to carry more weight:

  • Insight - what do you know that others don't? Add this slide between problem and solution.
  • Team - your founder-market fit argument has to be airtight.
  • Customer development - replace the traction slide with "what we've learned from 50 customer conversations." Show real quotes. Show what changed in your thinking.

Pre-traction raises happen, but they're sold differently. The investor isn't betting on the metrics - they're betting on the founder's insight and ability to execute.

The 10 anti-patterns

These will quietly kill a deck:

  1. Mission statement on the title slide. Cut it.
  2. "$50B market" with no methodology. Show your maths.
  3. Adjective inflation. "Revolutionary." "Disruptive." "World-class." Cut all of them.
  4. The waitlist as traction. Almost always a tell.
  5. The "no competition" slide. Always a tell.
  6. The 2x2 matrix where you're in the top right. Investors have seen 1000 of these.
  7. Pictures of the founders pointing at whiteboards. Stock photo energy.
  8. The 6-page appendix at the end. Move to a separate doc.
  9. "Powered by AI" without saying how. AI is now table stakes; saying you use it adds nothing.
  10. The closing "thank you" slide. Use the ask slide as your last slide.

The single best thing you can do

Read your deck out loud. Time yourself. If it takes more than 4 minutes to walk through, cut.

The best decks are the ones that leave you wanting more. The worst decks are the ones that try to tell you everything.


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